Saturday, March 15, 2014

Writing Task - p.54

                                                                                       

                                                                                        26 Gefen St.                                                                                                   Holon 

           March 15, 2014                                                                                                 
Mr. Adar Arad
The Principal
Kugel High School 
1 Mota Gur St.
Holon

Dear Mr. Arad, 

My purpose of writing this letter is to express my support in your recent decision to automatically expel from school whoever disrupts the lesson after the second warning. I believe that as people who are soon considered adults, it's in our power to behave ourselves, especially at school. 

In my opinion, expulsion after the second warning is a suitable punishment for those who interrupt the learning environment at school, because it teaches them to take responsibility over their actions. The School's job is to prepare its students for their future as grown people, and there isn't a better way to do so than teaching them that every action has its consequences. 

Moreover, this punishment also gives the students a second chance, because it occurs only after the second warning. This way, it teaches students that everyone is allowed to make mistakes and that every mistake is forgiven as long as it’s not a pattern of negative behavior.

In conclusion, I wholeheartedly agree with your decision and hope it will help the discipline at school to be stricter, because lately it seems like more and more students are disobeying school laws and I'm not happy about it.  

Sincerely yours,
Clara Green   

Great letter!
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Daphna   

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